高考英语优秀作文赏析：2008年北京卷情景作文2

满分作文2：

Dear Harry,

How are things going?

Last Monday, our class held the monitor election. The two candidates gave their speeches first and after that other students put the paper with the name of the ideal monitor into a box. The teacher made a calculation of the number of names voted by other students. At last the result was: Wang Hong got 28 votes while Liu Dong got 15. In that sense, Wang Hong won the election.

I’d like to know how the monitor election is conducted in your class.Hope to hear from you.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

名师点评：

本文叙事平稳，内容完整。词语使用平实，语法运用恰到好处，以准确的表达拿到比较高的分数。本文按图叙事，用first, after that, at last连接，结构分明。长短句综合运用，句式富于变化。

积累卡片：

好词：1. calculation n.计算2.candidate n.候选人

好句：1. The teacher made a calculation of the number of names voted by other students. 老师将其他同学选出的名字加以汇总。

好处：voted，动词的过去分词作状语。

2. Id like to know how the monitor election is conducted in your class.

我想知道你们班班长竞选是如何进行的。

好处：how引导的从句做宾语。